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I have set those free, who I do not need,

In order to get a tighter grasp on those I do.

I have gone down roads without destinations,

To accidentally stumble upon heaven, and bits of hell.

Miles of concrete gobbled up by underbellies of cold machines,

And at my lowest points, I have counted my blessings.



I am okay with loss now.

I am okay with picking up the pieces.

And I am definitely okay with trying.



Minutes and hours have passed where I have felt nothing but content inside this heart,

And in that,

I am okay with crossing out calendar days, which held moments of despair.

Because I have realized:

After the storms have passed, and the earth is busy dissolving the aftermath,

Darkness falls, and in the mean-time,

The sun will always peak over the horizon.


I will have a child’s eyes, seeing everything for the first time,

And everything will be beautiful again.
©2008-2009 *whorer-movie
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Author's Comments

Something I wrote for my Creative Writing 2 class awhile ago. This was my favorite poem that I wrote in that class.

I just realized all the poetry I have on here is omega old, and super shitty. I think my poetry has improved since I was 15 :P



anyway, I enjoy a change.

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:iconrenk-victim:
I enjoy it, too.

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Cheers.
:iconheartmaker:
Beautiful.

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A baby seal walks into a club.
:iconsonic-orgasm:
I especially :heart: this line:

I am okay with crossing out calendar days, which held moments of despair.




Brilliant. x

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:iconamelia-azazello:
(...) I will have a child’s eyes, seeing everything for the first time,


i love that desire of life :)
:iconwonderful-color:
this is really beautiful.

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your eyes must do some raining if you're ever gonna grow.


[link] <3
:iconslickrick17:
extremely well written.

and.. there's not much
more i can say.

it's great. :]

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-Vi Veri Veniversum Vivus Vici-

[By the power of truth, I, a living man, have conquered the universe]
:icongullwings134:
omg thats beautiful, i wish i could record my feelings in words like that, but untill i do i'll stick with unfinished pictures XDD [[and believe me, i have millions]]

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BEHOLD!!!! A CHOCOLATE BUNNY!!!------->[link]
:iconathysette:
Very well done. I love it. :+fav::

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:icongekitsu:
i L.O.V.E. the part about having childs eyes, thus keeping beauty from being tainted and even eradicated from everything.

very wise words you speak there.

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:devil:: I am anti-life, the beast of judgement. I am the dark at the end of everything. The end of universes, gods, worlds... of everything. And what will you be then, Dreamlord?
:sleep:: I am hope.
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< words 3

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I heard the door close
not slamming, but slinking shut
in an unfortunate and unhappy desire to be undetected
as if secrecy could lessen the pain....

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